Wish You Were Here To Hear Wish You Were Here Like You've Never Heard It

Ooooh, this might be at least a little controversial. I don't think people minded me too much taking the hatchet to Kansas and their music, because, well, it's Kansas, but what if we touch the untouchables like Pink Floyd? We'll find out together. There were a number of reasons why I wanted to rework this album, the main one being that there are parts of "Shine On You Crazy Diamond" which bore me to tears and that I don't want to sit through to get to the parts I like. But other ideas came up: What if, instead of the now mightily thinned out "Shine" the album really concentrates and is built around its title song? 

Now, obviously, this alternate take on Wish You Were Here isn't an attempt to improve the album or 'fix it' or whatever. I may be delusional, but I am not that delusional. No, this is a private project that just may be of interest to a couple of you. It is, if nothing else, a new way to listen to this old warhorse, because - for better or worse- you've never listened to Wish You Were Here like this. This is actually my second take on this album. The first one is, as I've seen when working on this new version, more than five years old, and it shows. It was only my second big mixing project, after a Blade Runner-themed one, but I was just starting out wih Audacity, and it showed. Even more so, I was just starting out with Alternate Albums, and that also showed. Figuring out what works and what not comes with time and experience, and a better trained set of ears, and now - half a decade and a not insignificant number of alt albums later - I am doing a much better job than I would have been able to in 2020. 

I was also greatly helped out by the access to new material. The 50th Anniversary Edition of the album had the band issue a couple of never-before released (or bootlegged) outtakes, including a set of demos for "Welcome To The Machine" and the pedal steel instrumental version of "Wish You Were Here". I can't tell you how much I love the latter - the high lonesome whine and sway of Gimour's pedal steel playing captures the melancholy of the track absolutely perfectly. Unnecessary to say, it is all over this version of the album - literally. It opens and closes proceedings as the thematic and melodic bookends, and makes another surprise appearance elsewhere. "Wish You Were Here" the song is the original version with the clear intro and Stéphane Grappelli's violin all over the second half of the song whereas it was mixed into practical inaudability on the final version, and it somewhat improbably continues the sound aesthetic that that pedal steel version of "Wish" started - this is at least partly Wish You Were Here as imagined by a country (-ish) band, fitting for what Gilmour called "a simple country song". 

Every track on here is different from the original line-up. "Have A Cigar" is the duet between Roger and Roy Harpe, and given the repetitiveness of its coda, cut down quite a bit. "Welcome To The Machine" exits in two versions, both very different from the album. The first version is the band demo, the second ("Welcome Back To The Machine") a part of Roger's original demo. And then, there's of course the bg one: "Shine On You Crazy Diamond". Nowhere is my growth in editing more obvious than here. The differences aren't necessarily just in the quality of the edits and transitions, though those got better and smoother, but in the way I listened to the original while thinking of editing it. When I did that first take on "Shine On You Crazy Diamond", I wasn't really thinking about the dynamics of a piece of music, I was pretty single-mindedly occupied with stitching together the parts of those two long suites that I liked. 

Though I ended up with a piece that almost had the same length, my first  unsuccessful stab at "Shine On" was quite different from the one on this album. Back then, I cut a personal highlight reel, this time I thought 'how could this work as a song, rather than a sequence of pieces?'. This led me to make some harsh, and no doubt controversial cuts: Using the first parts essentially as table-setting, a long mood-establishing intro before the song proper kicks in means getting rid of both of David Gilmour's guitar solos, for many a Floyd fan the highlight(s) of the track. On the first version I also kept parts of the last sections that shorn of their long movement-like structure felt stranded on an island, further leading to the feeling that that version was a not particularly well thought-out cut up. For the new version I took Roger Corman's old 'cut to credits when the monster is dead' logic, meaning, as soon as the song part is over, cue the fade. 

So, where does all this leave us? With a very different, and quite breezier version of the album, as this edit of Wish You Were Here is a mere 33 minutes long. I trimmed some of the fat while adding more than a touch of a different, maybe a little earthier version of Pink Floyd. I'd be interested to find out whether all of this works for you, or whether you think it's terrible that I'd massacred a sacred cow. As is, I am finally happy with a project that was in the furthest corners of the back of my mind for five years. I now have an alt version of Wish You Were Here that I'm proud of and happy with. And I hope, one or two of you will soon have that, too. So, friends and neighbors, shall we...dive in?